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22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3




1) The pitch. 

2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. 
I did not receive much feedback so I adjusted using the pitches that I watched.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I added information about the future expansion of the area that I am pitching my coffee shop in.  The coffee shop information itself is pretty self explanatory.

Comments

  1. VictoriaMarch 29, 2019 at 1:52 PM

    I liked how in your elevator pitch you used the stats on what was being built around to emphasize your customer base. I also enjoyed how your pitch didn't really feel like a pitch but a conversation. I think you could use this in daily life to start conversations about your potential business. I think you have a great idea. It makes sense if houses are being built it is just a matter of time before retail stores such as a coffee shop would be in high demand.

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  2. fedpseMarch 31, 2019 at 7:34 PM

    Hey Chris,

    Still a great pitch. I agree with Victoria; the pitch felt like a conversation more than a pitch, which I loved. I think if you talked more about the unique selling point of the coffee shop, I'd be sold.

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  3. Caroline PierceApril 1, 2019 at 12:35 PM

    Hi Chris,
    You keep your pitch very straight forward and simple. I like that you get right to the heart of the problem that there is a lack of coffee options in your area. The high demand you layout is a huge selling point for investors. You had clear enunciation and maintained a good volume throughout the pitch. One thing you could add is what would make your coffee shop stand out from others aside from its location.

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